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Briefing by *greenapplefreak:icongreenapplefreak:

Categories Fan Art > Cartoons/Comics > Traditional > Miscellaneous

©2009 *greenapplefreak
:icongreenapplefreak:

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Human: (Thinking of Elita One) it’s admirable to see a woman in your chain of command.
Ratchet: What are you talking about? Practically the whole brass is made of women!


Human!Transformers! yay! XD …only there’s a little bit of gender bender too… From left to right: Optimus Prime, Jazz, Ironhide and Prowl (who’s also the only one sensible enough to understand that blue camouflage is not camouflaging).

Fanart for :icononi-gil:! And her story: Light Worth Protecting. The story is about human!bayformers. I know it sounds dull, but the narrative is clear, the chapters are not long, and I have the slight suspicion I love her fic because it fulfils my misandric tendencies.


So yeah, the Prime, the SIC and the Special Ops are girls… the Weapons Specialist is still a dude… and they probably keep him around because ‘he can do his job almost as good as a femme would’ lol!

(That…or Prime doesn’t want to be accused of being sexist when picking commanders XP)


The scene is inside a tent somewhere in the desert, and I added sooo many patterns that by the time this was finished the file weighted 30 MB. -_-;
So if you have nothing else to do, check the original size and tell me what you see! =D

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:icononi-gil:
~Oni-Gil Apr 7, 2009, 8:33:24 AM
Woah, you do a LOT of small details, don't you? Hahaha, wow, I could spend an hour looking at the full-size one just to take it all in.

Heh, I came to realize just now that I haven't done much in the way of physical description, have I? Oops. Though your vision seems to run along most of the same lines, anyway! That's sometimes a problem I have in my writing: things are so clear in my head that I sometimes forget that they may not be so clear to the reader.

I love that Jazz is so short. And-- it must be said-- Prime is HOT. XD

I really like your style! It's so... so clean and pretty! And I love your colors, too! Great job overall, thank you SO much! :heart:

...I can't help but wonder what you'd be able to do with the Decepticons (some of them anyway)! *definitely not a blatant request, nosiree*

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:iconnightchildmoonchild:
~nightchildmoonchild Apr 7, 2009, 4:40:12 PM
Human!Optimus reminds me of Jill Valentine.

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:icongreenapplefreak:
Mood: Adoration *greenapplefreak Apr 7, 2009, 5:46:26 PM
Oh, there are so many things I could say in the subject. I could really go for hours, so I’ll try to make it short!
For one you do describe, and quite nicely (I remember Jazz’s dark and lustrous skin, Optimus petite stature and gentle smile, I even remember Starscream’s deranged look when Ratchet found him!), but having a good memory doesn’t equal a good attention span: I really tried to follow you descriptions… only the drawer in me took me to different places ^^;
So yeah, don’t change your writing just because you want to make things clear for everyone… just give us a story and let it stir inside our heads (besides, there’s nothing worse thatn a describing everything as he/she see it: e.g. “She was dressed in a long, plaited skirt color mauve, while her chestnut, elbow-length hair waved in the air…” See? Nothing worst!)
BTW, one thing that I read once is that during conflicting times (wars, depression, famine) women tend to keep their hairs short (maybe unconsciously they decide to keep them short to save money or time). It’s true! Of course, I changed that a little: OP keep her pretty long hair, only she doesn’t give it as much maintenance as before ;P
I have a sketch of Scopornok and his ‘mother’ but the drawing is very small…. Of course… I can always change it… ¬___¬!

I’m SO glad you liked it!!!!

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:icongreenapplefreak:
*greenapplefreak Apr 7, 2009, 5:56:06 PM
...er, who?
*googles it*
oh yeah... she kidna reminds her... mmmh.. Optimus with short hair... *rambles away*

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:iconnightchildmoonchild:
~nightchildmoonchild Apr 8, 2009, 2:43:58 AM
^^;Sorry 'bout that.

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:icononi-gil:
~Oni-Gil Apr 9, 2009, 6:28:14 PM
Oh, don't worry, I can go on for hours about my fics. XD I'm used to it. In fact, I prefer it.

Hahaha, a good memory is always nice to have. (This coming from someone with a pretty awful short-term memory. XD I remember the important stuff, honest!) Ahh, Starscream... *giggles* One of the hardest things when I'm writing this story is to write chapters that don't have Starscream in them. Haha, all the ideas that come into my head seem to involve him! CONSTANTLY! @.@

You're right, describing everything in one clump is VERY annoying and very... elementary-school. Still, I think I'll try to just slip things in here and there (the way I usually do it).

Ahh, that's an interesting fact! Funny, in my head I had Optimus with short-ish hair, but I actually like yours a lot better. :D It's so pretty. Guaranteed to catch Ironhide's attention. :giggle:

Ooooh! I'd love to see it! :heart:

Of COURSE I liked it! You're an amazing artist!

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:iconneofran15:
~neofran15 Jul 14, 2009, 7:00:00 PM
holy cow! This is amazing!
I could stare at this for an hour!! =D This is great work

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:icongreenapplefreak:
*greenapplefreak Jul 15, 2009, 6:11:09 AM
wow! thanks so much!!!
I really love this pic...even though not many people comment on it! ^^;

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~neofran15 Jul 15, 2009, 12:45:46 PM
Your welcome =D

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